An example of great art... but terrible story.
In terms of general aesthetic, your animation was exceptional. You guys are truly skilled illustrators, but your story and directing was honestly the worst I've seen in a long time. Your sense of humor was shotgunned at us in a quantity-over-quality fashion, which was probably fun to make but could have used significant revision. I'd really recommend collaborating with someone to do your scripting, and then let your visual creativity enhance it. I look forward to seeing stuff from you two in the future, but try to consider your audience and work on the humor a bit :)