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An example of great art... but terrible story.

In terms of general aesthetic, your animation was exceptional. You guys are truly skilled illustrators, but your story and directing was honestly the worst I've seen in a long time. Your sense of humor was shotgunned at us in a quantity-over-quality fashion, which was probably fun to make but could have used significant revision. I'd really recommend collaborating with someone to do your scripting, and then let your visual creativity enhance it. I look forward to seeing stuff from you two in the future, but try to consider your audience and work on the humor a bit :)

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

no.

Meh... Could have done so much more!

This entry was fine and all, but it really didn't pay proper homage to the damage that AYB has done to society. What I wanted to see were unphotoshopped images of actual AYB infiltration ... surely there were many comics, social commentary, etc., that included or mentioned AYB! Who cares about bad photoshop jobs? It's been done, and in fact, it's been done 5 years ago (hence the anniversary). I'm sure the more extreme of you nerds have defaced public property in some way as a tribute to AYB... why not show that? In my opinion, AYB's legacy holds much more value than its shoddy sequel.

Sonucais responds:

Good review.

Lots of ideas, but needs just as much work.

Although I enjoyed this animation, I couldn't make it through the entire thing. The pacing was extremely slow and the editing often sloppy. Consider using more than one perspective for shots to keep things moving, and if you're going to have everything move at the pace of a dialogue piece, make sure that every line is well thought out and witty.

There were many good ideas, and it served well as a parody, but try to cut out unnecessary pauses -- use them only for dramatic effect when necessary -- and keep the camera moving. It will make a huge difference.

Good luck in future projects! 7/10

rtil responds:

i care

Holy CRAP!

Someone actually did a walk-cycle!

Yeah, this was short and overal not THAT good, but you have some of the best walking on newgrounds =)

-Doodler

Rhade responds:

Do you have any idea how hard and boring that was?

GREAT ANIMATION!

I agree, the sound was rather annoying at times, but this movie had some of the best overal animation on newgrounds. *gasp* There were walk cycles, actual HAND DRAWN 3d rotations and all kinds of physics (such as the shirt flapping in the wind) that are hardly seen in other movies.
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If only this involved a lot of killing, naked chicks and drugs, it would be #1 in the portal.

-Doodler

Schmuckoid responds:

Actually.. there wasn't anything in this animation that was hand drawn, lol. It was all done with a mouse.. heh.

Ah....you bastard...

This movie almost made me laugh and cry at the same time...because of you, i dont get to win the NG shirt...bastard =P

Oh well, since I cant rip off your idea I think ill be stuck with my own =(

Good Job!

-Doodler

Ben-Spurgin responds:

I get a shirt??

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 0.0334 to 0.1018!

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